FloweringBlossoms

Hiya everyone! I meant to make this yesterday but got distracted whoops. Anyways, this journal is meant to ask for opinions, critiques, and updates concerning Facade! FIRST POINT: what did you think about the first chapter? How did you feel about the pacing, writing and characters? I know my writing isn't the best, but for what it is, how do you feel about the dialogue and how it works with the characters? Along with that, was it as you expected it to be? I did mention before-hand that the first two chapters are more slice of life oriented and will be a little slower pacing wise, but concerning the pacing and story, was it as you expected t